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(its a persuasive essay on wether its better to dream big or be realistic)

“Every decision I’ve ever made that led me to the right space and place in my life, I got there because I relied on that inner voice.” Oprah Winfrey had a rough start to her life but didn’t let bad things get in her way because she let herself follow her dreams. Dreaming big will always be the most influential thing in a person's life.

For Instance, In the movie Ratatouille, Remy wanted to be a chef, but he was a rat. His family thought that it was foolish and forbade him from pursuing his dream. His dream motivated him to try harder than ever before. Even though Remy was a rat, he became a chef because he dreamed big. If he didn't dream big, or if he had let his family dishearten him, he wouldn't have ever been able to follow his dream.

Another example of this is Oprah Winfrey. Growing up she was abused by her different family members. She dreamed of making a better life for herself. When she was older she received many rejections. After many failures, her big dreams inspired her to take the next steps in her career. She quit her job not knowing what would happen next and eventually became an international sensation.

Dreaming big will always be something that can give people motivation and create excitement. On the other hand, being realistic can sometimes be a better option. It prepares them for the absolute worst. Sometimes it's hard to be positive in the worst situations. By being Practical people can save themselves from a letdown and be a little more prepared for the unknown.

Being ambitious and dreaming big is a key part of accomplishing seemingly impossible things. It gives people motivation and inspiration. Dreaming big will always be the most influential thing in a person's life.

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Answer 1

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that's really good, I wouldn't say this is the best but it's really nice

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I think it means that he remembers it very well, and that his old memories are bringing forth the good in him.

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Summarize the purpose and process of working in a successful writing group.

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Circle the cause and
underline the effect.
The roof was damaged
during the tornado.

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Answer:

Cause (does something to another thing): tornado

Effect (the out come of an event): roof was damaged

Explanation:

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"A way of managing emotions is, identifying
what is really bothering us and regulate it
never try to repress them." this is an example
of a...
○Topic Sentence
○ Conlusion Sentence
○Supportive Sentece​

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Supportive sentence, because it can’t be conclusion or a topic sentence. Both forms of sentences normally do not begin with “ a way”, but when supporting a sentence, notice how they use “ a way” to show different ways to manage emotions. Hope this helped

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In what way was Henry David Thoreau's outlook on life a Romantic one?

a.) He found spiritual truths through a simple life in nature.

b.) He connected spiritual progress with material progress.

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B

Explanation:

Answer:

b.) He connected spiritual progress with material progress.

When a crowd gathers outside Les's house, Steve
comments, "Let's not be a mob!" What does this show
about Steve?

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This shows that he doesn't want to make a mess. He wants to be organized. And cares about his friend being attacked by a mob. Hope this helps. To give more info I would need more information about him.

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a

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What is a characteristic goal and purpose of all persuasive business messages?

A.
to make judgments
B.
to influence others
C.
to assert an opinion
D.
to present facts

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B

Explanation:

because its persuasive

why does George speak for lennie? What excuse does he give for this

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The boss doesn't like George and Lennie's relationship because the boss thinks that George is hiding something. What excuse does George give for Lennie's slowness? His excuse for Lennie was that he was a hich in the head by a loss when he was hiding.

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what has no neck but no head

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The answer is a shirt

25 points to whoever can answer this

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I think the 3rd option would be the best

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I think the answer is... Look for more text information from magazines and articles.

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I need a 8th Grade, Informative/ Explanatory Essay, about an favorite activity.

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do it kid and stop being lazy and something so easy

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I can't write your essay for you, but I can give you a sample essay.

This should give you the idea and get you started.

1) “Everyone needs to do their part to make the evening a success,” Jasmine said. (2) She stood before a group of white-clad chefs in the cozy kitchen of Barter and Sons Restaurant. (3) She had given cooking assignments to everyone in an effort to organize the food preparation for the impending wedding reception.
(4) The group scattered as the chefs began their tasks. (5) Suddenly Jasmine noticed that two people were standing still and looking confused. (6) She groaned mentally as she realized it was the two worst chefs—Marissa and Hani.
(7) Marissa raised her hand.
(8) “What do you want Hani and I to cook?” she asked.
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What change, if any, should be made in the passage?
A.
Make no change.
B.
Change "I" to "me" in sentence 8.
C.
Change "their" to "his or her" in sentence 4.
D.
Change "she" to "her" in sentence 2.

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A. Make no change.

Explanation:

According to the given passage, the writer constructed each sentence with grammatical accuracy with no errors whatsoever.

In sentence 8, there is no need to change the pronoun "I" to "me" because it is used correctly.

Also, in sentence 4, the word "chefs" are in a group and there is no need for individual terms like "his/her".

Sentence 2 is correct the way it is.

In this excerpt the author conveys the idea that Linette is confident by...
A) including detailed interactions with other characters
B) including dialogue that implies she is confident
C) describing her behavior
D) directly telling the reader

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It’s B
And if it’s not that it’s A

What change is needed in sentence 4?
O Delete who spend large amounts of time on social media applications
O Change they to them
O Change large amounts of time to a large amount of time
O Change it to them

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“However, recent studies report that young adults who spend large amounts of time on social media applications say they experienced more social isolation than those who spent less time on it”

It’s the third option... it’s the only one that makes sense.

what are the nouns in "The cause of the fire is still unknown"

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Answer:

Nouns:

Fire

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Write a creative Christmas story. Be sure to include characters, a magical setting, dialogue, and
fun! The more detailed and creative; the better your grade.

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Answer:

It was Christmas eve morning and when i woke up i could smell moms famous double chocolate pancakes with whipped cream on top. I rushed down stairs still in my plaid red pajama shirt and plain black leggings with my fuzzy slippers, and there my mom was in the kitchen with her apron that says "Merry Christmas" in bright red lettering, around the lettering were green Mistletoe's. "Good morning Lilly" my mom said to me with the biggest smile on her face. "good morning mom, wheres dad and Sarah?" i asked with a confused look on my face because we all usually gather on the island talking to mother, but this morning was different. "oh hunny, your father had to go to work early and you sister is with him" her smile got smaller as she told me that. "but they will be back in time for dinner right?" "yes Lilly, your father only had to be there for a couple of hours then him and your sister will be on there way home in no time!" her smile got bigger again. "Why don't you go get dressed while i finish up breakfast." "Okay" i said with a smile and rushed upstairs as quickly as i could to come back and eat.

That is all i have time for i hope it works. you can add whatever you would like to make it better or add on!!

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HELP PLEASE TAKING A TEST !!!! Which selection from the excerpt from The Condition of the Working-Class in England in 1844 supports the idea that the creation of the jenny had positive effects?

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Answer: It had positive effects because of wars

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Answer: Hitherto, so far as this has been possible, etc...

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Find two current events/debates from two different publications that are new to you. Write a one-paragraph reaction about each publication’s perspective on both issues.

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In my first event ( The Black Lives Matter Movement), the article seemed very biased towards this movement, with during further intrest on the publisher, it showed that the publisher was pro All Lives Matter movement which is like the "rebuttle" for the BLM movement. Over all the article was very biased and against the BLM movement. The author had a link to  an atricle posted on abortion. In this atricle he was very pro choice on this matter and seemed also bias on the fact of her body her chocie. Two different others teo different iew points.

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Toucan birds are so amazing! My cousin Zan just loves those colorful birds! Did you krow that they weigh tess tharn a pound?
Can you believe that the average lerngth of a toucan bird's bill is eight inches? So, which exhibit will you visit the rext time
you go with Gramps to the San Diego zoo?
Which BEST describes the sentence variety in this paragraph?
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A
The sentences are interrogative or exclamatory
The sentences are interrogative and declarative
The sentences are prinarily informative and declaratory.
The letter contains declarative, imperative, and exclanatory sentences
oniy.

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ANSWER;

the sentences are interrogative and exclamatory .

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Idols are people who you look up to, people admire them because they want to become that person and wish to one day live the life they live (only answering one cause you’re not supposed to ask multiple questions in one)

Question 1 : Who are idols? Why do people admire them? Answer: An Idol can be a religious image or someone that people admire. The reason why people admire them is because Idols might have talents like singing, dancing, acting, and more! Or they just inspire many people to follow their dreams and stuff. OR they just want to be like their idol and hope that one day they can live a life like celebrities (That's just my opinion).

Question 2: How can one become a celebrity? Answer: You can become a celebrity in many ways. You can be a personal assistant, a stylist, a journalist,or maybe even a bodyguard. In these days, it is alot easier to become a celebrity. Social media and technology makes it easier. However becoming a "celebrity" takes time and commitment. It might not happen overnight but it is possible.

Question 3: Can also ordinary people be idols and examples for us? Who for example? Answer: Of course ordinary people can become idols! All the idols and celebrities were "ordinary" before fame. You can be an inspiration to anyone. You can inspire other people in many ways.

Question 4: Who are fictional heroes? Answer: I don't really know about fictional heroes but I found the top 4 fictional heroes, they are Atticus Finch, Indiana Jones, James Bond, and Rick Blaine.

Question 5: Do you have such an idol? Answer: If your talking about me, I really don't have an Idol.

I know these aren't all of the questions but I hope it helps. Have a great day :D

What attitude does Nene display toward Nnaemeka’s cultural upbringing? What words reveal this attitude?

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The words reveal this attitude as an attitude of bewilderment. We can see this in the phrase: " I had always thought you Ibos were kindly disposed to other people.”

The description of a station is a way of feeling or acting toward a person, thing, or situation. Passion for a sport, dislike for a certain actor, and negativity toward life, in general, are each an illustration of a station. When Nene is talking to her fiancée, she wonders why he's so discouraged and indecisive about telling his father about the marriage. Nnaemeka starts explaining that not all parents reply happily when their son gets married to a person they did not choose. The words" I had always allowed you Ibos were kindly disposed to other people ”, indicate that she's bewildered by this disclosure when she had allowed that there would be no problem with accepting her into their family.

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Read this excerpt from Anne Frank Remembered.

That day I walked to Gestapo headquarters. The red-and-black swastika flew from the flagpole. Uniformed Germans were everywhere. It was a well-known fact that people who entered this building did not always leave it again. I entered the building and inquired of the soldiers on guard where this Austrian had his office.

I was told which office, and went directly there. It was a medium-sized room, filled with desks, all occupied by workers who were busily typing. The Austrian's desk was in the corner of the room. He sat behind it facing me when I entered. His name was Karl Silberbauer.

I went up to his desk and stood with my back to the typists. I'd been thrown off by the fact that he wasn't alone, so all I did was stand there, briefly looking into his eyes. Any spoken words would have been audible throughout the room, so I just stood and didn't say a word. All I did was rub my thumb against the two fingers beside it, the index finger and the middle finger – the sign for money.

Why does Miep choose to visit Gestapo headquarters?

A. She is no longer afraid of the Germans.
B. She seeks a friendship with the Austrian.
C. She believes the Austrian owes her money.
D. She is desperate to find help for her friends.

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C would be the answer because of the gestures she used in the office

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D: She is desperate to find help for her friends.

Explanation:

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Answer:

C. He feels a strong emotional bond to his collected objects.

Explanation:

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Which of the following synonyms has the most negative CONNOTATION?

Question 9 options:

j.a.b.b.e.r.i.n.g


c.h.a.t.t.y


t.a.l.k.a.t.i.ve


c.o.n.v.e.r.s.a.t.i.o.n.a.l

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Answer: jabbering

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The answer is jabbering.
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As Will's father enters the elevator, there isn't any smoke from the cigarettes. There are three people who have been smoking and there has been a cloud of smoke in the elevator each time someone got on. Why do you believe the author doesn't include smoke this time?

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Answer:

The author does not include the smoke this time to give the feeling of breathability, which alludes to freedom.

Explanation:

This question is about "Long Way Down".

The elevator has a strong symbolism in this story because it represents the prison and the claustrophobic feeling that is inside Will's mind that cannot deviate from thoughts of revenge, mistakes, failure, fear and grief. When the author includes quotes about cigarette smoke from the ghosts who are with Will, the elevator takes on the symbolism of a suffocating and unbreathable environment, which is how Will's thoughts present themselves.

However, when the elevator reaches its destination, the ghosts disappear and the smoke disappears, creating a breathable environment. When the author stops citing smoke, he shows that the elevator can have another meaning, that of restart and freedom and that is Will's chance to follow that meaning.

Lines 37–50: Repeated words and phrases are a clue to theme. What words and ideas are repeated in these stanzas? What is the central idea, or theme?

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Incomplete question. I inferred you are referring to the story “New Orleans” by Joy Harjo.

Explanation:

The following words/phrases were repeated:

"My spirit comes here to drink.""Creeks knew...him"

The central idea or theme here is the issues faced by those who immigrated to Mississippi during the 1800s. One of those who experienced this was Spanish explorer, Hernando de Soto.

Based on "Pakistan’s Malala,” which best states why blogging was an effective and useful way for Malala to share her experiences?

A) It allowed Malala to continue her education in a different way while still living in Swat.

B) It allowed Malala to share what she was facing in Swat with a select few individuals.

C) It allowed Malala to keep a log of her whereabouts so people outside Swat could know where she would be speaking.

D) It allowed Malala to share what was going on in Swat with an audience across the globe.

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Answer:

It allowed Malala to share what was going on in Swat with an audience across the globe.

Explanation:

I took the test and got it correct

Answer:

It’s d

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How do "house" and "home" differ in connotation?

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Answer:

house refferse to a building someone lives in

home refferse to building or place

how can we say that the food has become a global culture​

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How can you say that junk food has become a global culture? Junk food is famous all over the world and people are using it day by day replacing their traditional food. So, we can say that junk food has become a global culture.

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Yes we can say that food is a global culture because with out it no can survive in earth only drinking water is nott good to our body we have to eat some food like geeting protein,carbon dioxide, nutrition etc....then only we can be healthy and we can doo whatever we want to do in our future now a day a food is very important to each and every single person without eat we are nothing....time to time we should have to drink,eat and be happy

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